Everywhere I go and watch you,my heart beats as fast as a bumblebee's wings.
Whenever we argue,my feelings for you are negative as death.
But when it comes to love, you make me shine like a diamond in you're eyes.
So whenever I have these feelings I can hardly imagine how bad it would feel to not have them at all.
ARTIST:Victor Del Toro
TITLE:YOU
SOURCE:Written
TYPE:Free Verse
2 comments:
Hey Victor this is Jessica! That was the sweatest poem ever keep up the good work!
-Jessica
W/B
nice poem boy, you could do better ,write another one ,becuase that one is bad, said fernie and he loves you,
keep up the good work you have dont so far ,dont ever give up(talking you as a retarded person so you will understand)pppppppppppeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaccccccccccccceeeeeeee
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